Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Suite 5B


The night was dark and musical. Her thin white dress clung to her body and seemed to glow against the sky. They were both transfixed with each other, working up a sweat in the heat of every stolen moment. Whispering and giggling through each action like school children in a play.

"Don't put it in that far, just go slow now" she said timidly, grasping his arm and stealing his gaze.

"It'll be fine, don't worry, I am a trained professional" he said trying to encourage her.

"Well straighten it out at least, that should help".

"It doesn't really work that way, I got this" he mumbled as he touched her cheek softly and winked.

"Oh there it is, now we got it".

"Faster, oh, that's it, Faster ,, now just let go......"

"Why are we whispering?"

"I don't know just shut up and push!" She moaned teasingly.

Their breathing was now in unison. Holding hands tightly and staring, longing for the climax. Every moment made their mouths water. A thirst that needed to be quenched as quickly as they could.

When the soda dropped, she kissed his cheek quickly and giggled.

"Damn, I didn't think that stupid machine was ever gonna take that dollar!"

"I'm glad it did, you fucked me so hard last time, my mouth still feels like the desert!! "

"Let's do it again!"

They ran back down the corridor of a seedy hotel. A neon sign blinking "Vacancies" casts a creepy red glow in their room. The smell of sex and stale beer permeate the air. Young love is in full bloom in suite 5B.

3 Dark Enlightening Thoughts:

Anonymous said...

holy shit this is hot.....

I so love this kind of writing where you really never know where its going until you get there... Do you recall the one I did with the sleeping bag? much like that one...

this is so good, o where the hell is 5B? destiny says I should have been there...

The Invisible Seductress said...

I wasn't even there...sighing....find 5B!!!

mac said...

I think I have a spare key.
It might fit 5B!