Wednesday, March 10, 2010


Who is it that holds a more powerful stance?
The one who thinks he does, or the woman who lets him?
You'll have to thrust harder if you want me to flinch.
Go deeper if you want me screaming out for you.
Will you crawl to me while I put submission back in your eyes?
Can you be the prey when you think yourself a predator?
I look up at you as the victim because that's what you want.
I will look down on you as mine when hunger strikes for quarry.
Where will you be when the power shifts back?
On your knees, in fantasy, or right where I positioned you?
I will take all of you , I will fill your furtive desires.
You'll beg me to crawl as you put submission back in my eyes.

6 Dark Enlightening Thoughts:

The Savage said...

o0o0o0o0 good poem :D. Especially since I used to work at a dungeon club....

The Invisible Seductress said...

wink wink!

Nevine said...

Excellent sense of command and power in the narrator's voice... Very nice!


The Invisible Seductress said...

Nevine- I have read your writings- I take that as a great compliment! Thank You!

Anonymous said...

Go deeper if you want me screaming out for you.



The Invisible Seductress said...

Sir Thomas--wink--hug--